Toiletman: The First Adventure (I)
22 Comments on "Toiletman: The First Adventure (I)"
You're still doing great, Elgin, and I'm really starting to see yout story line take off. Also, what an awesome revalation for the poop guy!
It's really funny too! Take a good look at the images for some added subliminal stuff...
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"Double the flush, double the fun" --The Amazing Anus
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Fabulous artwork!Great story.You are as talented as any comic book artist or comic strip artist or cartoonist out there.You have a gift.You should be a pro.
Agreed, great work. Looks like it will turn out as a really in depth story (or maybe just several poop jokes, either way it's good). I cannot wait to see the "Power Plunger" in action.
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Number One . . . I order you to take a number two.
Number One . . . I order you to take a number two.
Yes Logjam - large plungers - are you really into that?
Good stuff again Elgin.
The voice of sanity
That toilet monster is great! So Doc Octopus.
While it may be trivial, the thing I like abot these cartoons is that the hero is wearing a terry-cloth towel as a cape, or it seems. I used to run around the house with a towel cape as a kid. It's a nice touch.
There is alot of wordage, but you've got alot to say early on, huh?
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I'm really starting to like this series. Keep up the good work! I wonder if toiletman will find the FunkBott that ate Crunch and Gadget...
Some are born crappy, some achieve crappiness, and some have crapiness thrusted upon them. (Do NOT be the last one)
how much stupider can this site get?! this is the lamest thing i've ever seen my god grow up and learn some real humor!!!
The other day, in the park, I saw two men kissing. And until I saw this comic, that was the gayest thing I'd ever seen.
I'm sure there's a lot of time and effort invested in this, but it really, really sucks.
Message for the artist.
You need to use black and white more effectively. Your art is difficult to read because you don't use enough black.
For your reference (and homework), there's a good description on this here:
How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way
by Stan Lee, John Buscema
Chapter's 9 and 12.
The fact that you inspire so many people to like it and so many people to hate it, Elgin, is a sign that you're doing something right. If everyone likes it, then you're doing something people have already grown comfortable with. The best ideas are always the ones people argue about.
Honestly I like it. I'm a fan of the new style and the new story. Forget the thing about all comics being made the same way. I keep looking forward to the next one, ever since I saw the first one. Keep it up!
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"Double the flush, double the fun" --The Amazing Anus
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This comic stinks. I mean, I can smell it from here. Either that, or my boss farted in the hall again.
Toiletman, you may appreciate this. In 1981, I was living in a house shared by the girlfriend of Peter Laird. I got to know him fairly well. At the time he was doing some freelance drawing but mostly earning money operating a comic book shop in Northampton, MA, back when the rents there were cheap. His parents thought he was headed nowhere. About two years later I ran into him -- he was all excited about the new drawings he had just done with Kevin Eastman (which he showed me) of TMNT. I walked away thinking to myself that the cheese had finally slipped off his cracker. Two years after that, I was bragging to everyone about sort of knowing him. Anyway, keep plugging away at what you feel passionate about, and screw the critics.
Logjam
__Elgin , Pretty cool stuff, Thanks for the effort._____
"show that turd who's boss"
"show that turd who's boss"
make me a sexy bitch
Okay, you're a sexy bitch. Oh damn, it didn't work, you're still a retarded little troll who shouldn't be playing on mommy's computer.
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The proper order is kiss me, then go smell the other dog or cat's butt. I cannot stress this enough.
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